A Birthday Gift For You(For Daniel Brick) Poem by Bharati Nayak

A Birthday Gift For You(For Daniel Brick)

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I thought
I should present you a flower
On your birthday
A beautiful and sweet scented flower
Perhaps
You will forget yourself for a while
Seeing its beauty and inhaling its fragrance
But then you will be saddened
When you will see its wilted petals
With no colour and no fragrance.
Then it struck me
Why not I present you a green sapling
That will be full of promise
To grow big and big
With promise of sweet scented flowers
And many many fruits
Inviting the nature guests
To build their nests
In the hollow of its heart
To enjoy its cool shade
To inhale the scent of its colourful flowers
And to feed on its sweet fruits
Throwing seeds throughout your garden
With many more promises
That will never cease.

Thursday, June 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2020

My B'day is coming soonly Thanks for the GIFT SIS

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2020

Thank you Poet Poet for your reading and appreciating my poem.

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Kim Barney 14 June 2020

Fantastic poem, Bharati! What better gift than a tree? I just planted a new tree in my yard a couple of weeks ago. I probably won't live long enough to see it get big and strong.

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2020

Thank you Kim Barney for your wonderful comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 June 2020

@Kim Barney, may you live long enough to see the plant get get big and strong!

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

What a sweet and brilliant poem! ! ! So heart warming! A tree is a magnificent gift! Thank you for sharing this thoughtful, touching, splendid piece!

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Timber Koleden 19 November 2025

My mistake... I meant to type 'Daniel Brick'... I make mistakes when I type too fast.

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Timber Koleden 19 November 2025

And, if you don't mind me asking, who is John Brick? I am certain that he is a wonderful fellow!

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Timber Koleden 19 November 2025

What a sweet poem! What better gift to give than a tree indeed! So wonderfully written with such kind consideration intertwined! Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem!

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Nabakishore Dash 06 December 2021

Excellently crafted awesome poem mam.worthy of being revisited.Thanks to your better choice of birthday gift.

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