A Breath Of Air Poem by Tom Billsborough

A Breath Of Air

Rating: 5.0

Je suis un souffle de vent
Ici maintenant mais bientôt oublie
Et bien sure la rose conserve
Sa gloire depuis seulement un petit jour.

I am but a breath of air.
Here now but soon forgotten
And certainly the rose retains
its glory for but a day.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2018

Tom, such a well crafted write👍👍👍

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Annette Aitken 05 August 2018

Now that's the master at work. Beautiful Tom.

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wes vogler 25 July 2018

c'est bon... Merci.

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tom billsborough 25 July 2018

As I can't use the reply button, here's a message to thank you for your comments Kumarmani. Butch and Bernard.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 July 2018

Life is dependent on breath of air. Rose retains its glory due to fragrance. If breath is gone and life is in in danger without air this provokes thought and brings sadness. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Butch Decatoria 25 July 2018

A most beautiful piece, an artwork of words, imagery, profound love in its message. Thank you. This will become one of my favorites. Bravo.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

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