A broken world needs unity
And it does not need mutiny.
Because a world pieced together
Make good moments last forever.
Don’t make this world an amputee
Let it stand, move, and walk firmly.
A complete world is just better
Than a disunited structure.
Make this broken world whole again,
Make it a united domain.
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Copyright © 2010 by Obed Dela Cruz
(February 19,2010; Marikina City)
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Insightful poem....if only unity is possible to attain then this broken world can be mend!
well written.. truly a broken world can only be fixed by unity. i wonder when will it happen. .obed. yep i am part of sama ka org. (=
I also liked this very much, received with thanks and deep appreciation.
This is the need of the hour. All human beings should come together as one to save the world from further destruction.10++
Bravo Obed! I liked this one. we are the World, if each one betters himself the world would be more united than ever...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
smart personification. could be called cheesy but effectively so.