Obed dela Cruz

Rookie - 279 Points (October 18,1995 / Marikina City)

Daystar's Home - Poem by Obed dela Cruz

Is there a spot where the sun lays to rest
When brightness escapes into the night sky?
Is there a cradle the stars call their nest
Where they can leave the sadness that passed by?

Is there a world where my heart can find peace
Because light appears in every corner?
Where is this cosmos the day does not cease
Nor hide even once, nor set to slumber?

I know it is somewhere in time and space,
Perhaps still keeping itself from our view
Until it finally unfolds in place
To be specially seen by me and you.

Because I believe there is more to learn
Of this residence, this sanctuary.
It is a temple where I always yearn
To walk on and find out its mystery.

For I heard that dawn is ever waking
There in its horizon, its glorious spheres
And the morning dew is always taking
Away the memories causing our fears.

Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land
It is not as far as you imagine.
Fly until on its very courts you stand
And utter the cry that was kept within.

Because this is your home; here, you can be
The soul can always have inspiration.
Beyond the edges, today you are free
It goes more than just seeing a vision.

But take account of the things you perceive
Lest this might be a stardust of the past.
And in remembrance, you know you believe
Never let go and make this journey last.


Comments about Daystar's Home by Obed dela Cruz

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (8/11/2017 8:14:00 PM)


    Heartwarming poem...... Congrats for being picked twice.... A perfect vote++++++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rini Jerry (8/11/2017 4:28:00 PM)


    Perfect poem for been chosen as poem of day.. I enjoyed reading it
    Congratulations
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  • (8/11/2017 4:17:00 PM)


    I wish i could send you an infinity of stars to show my appreciation for your beautiful poem..a ten.. (Report) Reply

  • Glen Kappy (8/11/2017 7:42:00 AM)


    obed, i find much here i relate to and am interested to check out more of your poems. -glen kappy (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2017 5:10:00 AM)


    great poem. congrats on being the port for the day. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (8/11/2017 3:52:00 AM)


    Congratulations, my friend! Wonderful poem to read! All the best in all your ventures! (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (8/11/2017 3:31:00 AM)


    a wonderful inventive poem of a place that would hopefully please all? ....................well written. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/11/2017 3:04:00 AM)


    Congratulations Obed Dela Cruz for this marvelous write. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/11/2017 3:03:00 AM)


    Is there a world where my heart can find peace
    Because light appears in every corner?
    Where is this cosmos the day does not cease
    Nor hide even once, nor set to slumber?
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land
    It is not as far as you imagine.
    Fly until on its very courts you stand
    And utter the cry that was kept within.- - - - - -It is not only about the mystery of day and night, but about the place where is always light.The poetic spirit searches for this place, believes with conviction that there is surely one and yet to be discovered.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/11/2017 12:37:00 AM)


    A beutiful poem on spirit having free and stunning expression.Congratulation for being selected as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/11/2016 2:33:00 PM)


    A fascinating poem. Congrats on having it chosen as member poem of the day!
    Well done.
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  • (8/11/2016 11:25:00 AM)


    Never let go and make this journey last.
    Heartiest Congrats on The Poem Of The Day.
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  • (8/11/2016 10:49:00 AM)


    Sanctuary is vital to us all. like this poem. Well done Obed.
    Tom billsborough
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  • Rajnish Manga (8/11/2016 9:01:00 AM)


    This is like casting a glance on the universe around us and watching it vis-e-vis the characterstic activities of a man's life, raising certain queries and trying to seek a plausible answer. Thanks for sharing and Congrats for being selected for the Day. I quote a few lines:
    Is there a spot where the sun lays to rest
    Is there a world where my heart can find peace
    I know it is somewhere in time and space,
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/11/2016 6:40:00 AM)


    In time and space! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/11/2016 3:37:00 AM)


    Morning a dew is taking away the memories of our fears- - Positivity shining on, I agree so much. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (8/11/2016 1:35:00 AM)


    Congrats. A good poem.

    Robert
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    Robert Murray Smith Robert Murray Smith (8/11/2017 12:27:00 AM)

    I confirm my comment of one year ago.
    Robert

  • Ramesh T A (8/11/2016 1:35:00 AM)


    A free expression of spirit by a young poet is overwhelming my heart to muse on seeing such a beautiful poetry after long...! (Report) Reply

  • Akachukwu Lekwauwa (8/11/2016 1:25:00 AM)


    congrats on the feat., .......interesting piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 24, 2011


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