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Daystar's Home

Rating: 4.3

Is there a spot where the sun lays to rest
When brightness escapes into the night sky?
Is there a cradle the stars call their nest
Where they can leave the sadness that passed by?

Is there a world where my heart can find peace
Because light appears in every corner?
Where is this cosmos the day does not cease
Nor hide even once, nor set to slumber?

I know it is somewhere in time and space,
Perhaps still keeping itself from our view
Until it finally unfolds in place
To be specially seen by me and you.

Because I believe there is more to learn
Of this residence, this sanctuary.
It is a temple where I always yearn
To walk on and find out its mystery.

For I heard that dawn is ever waking
There in its horizon, its glorious spheres
And the morning dew is always taking
Away the memories causing our fears.

Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land
It is not as far as you imagine.
Fly until on its very courts you stand
And utter the cry that was kept within.

Because this is your home; here, you can be
The soul can always have inspiration.
Beyond the edges, today you are free
It goes more than just seeing a vision.

But take account of the things you perceive
Lest this might be a stardust of the past.
And in remembrance, you know you believe
Never let go and make this journey last.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 11 August 2017

a wonderful inventive poem of a place that would hopefully please all? ....................well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 August 2016

In time and space! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ramesh T A 11 August 2016

A free expression of spirit by a young poet is overwhelming my heart to muse on seeing such a beautiful poetry after long...!

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 11 August 2016

congrats on the feat., .......interesting piece

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 August 2016

Morning a dew is taking away the memories of our fears- - Positivity shining on, I agree so much.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 August 2020

This is very inspiring indeed for everybody has a place to reside, to rest even for the sun and stars in cosmos that is of course a mystery yet all go within a home found for soulful rest.....very well scripted 10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 August 2020

We find out the peaceful home we run and run after the peaceful spot We wanna buy cosmic beauty with us forever We wanna residential place must be divine wherever we go But it's difficult if we do not work according to our desire

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 August 2020

Go, my spirit, and take wing to this land It is not as far as you imagine. Fly until on its very courts you stand And utter the cry that was kept within. .......the spot, the world is this spirit, self spirit or soul; if the self soul feels peace, if the self soul does anything welfare for the whole world then this soul or spirit finds out the peace, ever peaceful world; congrats for being selected thrice this beautiful poem as POD

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2020

'I know it is somewhere in time and space, Perhaps still keeping itself from our view Until it finally unfolds in place To be specially seen by me and you' - Let's hope we can see that place someday! A poem that rhymes well, a thing of my liking. Congratulations on being selected the 'Member Poem of the Day', year after year on the same day!

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Lyn Paul 11 August 2020

A beautiful reminder for one to enjoy every possible thing about life. For there is always light. Thank You

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