A Call At Midnight Poem by Sanjib Das

A Call At Midnight

Rating: 4.1


I heard a call at midnight,
Being frightened, I pressed my pillow tight.
Again the voice called me by name,
I considered the ghost or the same.

The voice came near and near,
In my mind, I felt fear.
Suddenly, someone knocked at the door,
I became frightened more.

The door had been broken,
I was shaken.
Two hands embraced me affectionately,
I accepted it dearly.

I awoke from my dream with a feeling,
I found myself below my bed in the morning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 02 July 2009

wowwwwwwwww so you got scared and hid below your bed im laughing imagining Sanjib kissing the ghost very hilarious -10 anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 July 2009

a 10 + for ya dreamscape penned beautifully!

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Lisa Bray 05 July 2009

this is a lovly piece i do like it keep up the good work an thanks for shearing lisa bray +10

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 July 2009

well i dont know this is in a way bit like a scene from a thriller.. but last part is sort of humerous though.. this is any case this is an entertaining piece indeed...thanks for this one with love shan

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Arlette Murillo 07 July 2009

Very nice poem: D ur write very nicely keep it up (y)

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Sumita Datta 03 February 2010

I must say... it's a very different write... Liked this piece of write.. :)

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Anand Madhukar 06 October 2009

Hahaha. A smooth transition from fear to laughter.

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Ben Gieske 28 September 2009

Scary but I ended up laughing with the ending.

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Marieta Maglas 23 September 2009

wonderful abstract poem, lovely to read.......10+++++

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rago rago 08 July 2009

It is nice to see below the below......... hahaha....... is the dream come true Oh! God! what will happen......... I enjoyed yur writing..........

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