If the world around you brings grief
And you hardly find relief,
Then seek the spiritual pole comforting your soul.
If your country rulers don't care
For the people's education, health, welfare,
Let sunbeams illuminate their minds
For the better of people's life and daydreams.
If people noble values forget
And their ancestors do not respect,
Help them listen for the sublime voice of silence
That's of paramount importance!
If warships stay on the shore
And innocent children live no more,
Send waves of compassion, sympathy
For their families missing them ever more.
Please keep struggling for a peaceful chance
Trust both God and your spiritual pole
You shall be alive, hopefully
Understanding this complex life dance!
Your poem has good rythem and contains a good message. It is a nice poem.
a beautiful message combined with poetry, such a lovely write.
Please keep struggling for a peaceful chance Trust both God and your spiritual pole You shall be alive, hopefully Understanding this complex life dance! A delightful message.
A thoughtful message for the ultimate goodness of mankind. A lovely imagery for a peaceful soul..... may the goodness prevail.
beautiful poem with a great message in it i love the words and imagery too lovely write
Completely done with beautiful imagery perfected by positive thoughts! loved it_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very good i like it