In that top corner of the house
A cobweb swaying in breeze
What made the breeze become the wind
A foul play..it blew butting blind
Chasing the wind now cobweb in a play
It's His mercy the spider back on way
Behold, he is weaving again his house
Note:Thank you PoemHunter for selecting my poem 'A Collapsed House Rebuilt' for the Poem Of The Day..thanks a lot for this honour
Dear Indira Ma'm! I am so happy and pleased to see your poem as the POD. Heartiest Congratulations! You highly deserve this honour. A lovely little poem of hope, perseverance and life! What greater example than a spider! A full score of 100 for you dear, dear Poetess!
Thanks a lot dearest Geeta..I am happy you got it rightly...yes, it is the relentless effort of the tiny spider...thanks again Geeta
A wonderful little poem on a wonderful little happening. A ray of light may not reach that corner of the house, but the poet's imagination has reached there well. jahan na phonche ravi, vahan phonche kavi.
There is a beautiful combination on breeze, wind and cobweb. Visited time and again. Five stars.
A wonderful poem imbued with insight and wisdom. Hardwork is a great attribute to gain success in life. A clever write with great imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Life always finds a way to express itself- even in unlikeliest of forms. Thanks & Congrats for this poem adjudged POD, Indira Ma'm.
Very true..Thank you very much Rajnish Manga for your good words