Mary Nagy

Rookie (11-08-1970)

A Collision Of Souls - Poem by Mary Nagy

When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake
she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.

Right then and there she knew it, her world forever changed.
Her life took on new meaning as if all was prearranged.

She knew she had to meet him, this guy moved in next door.
So she slipped on her bikini and went strolling by the shore.

She paid him no attention, just made sure that he would see
the woman he would surely love from then till eternity.


When he first saw her walking down the beach without a care
he didn't have the nerve to speak, just gave an open stare.

He knew right then he loved her though he didn't know her name.
From that day on he knew his life would never be the same.

He tried to get attention yet you'd think she didn't see
the feelings that he couldn't hide had nearly made him flee.

He knew he had to meet her, this young girl in the sun.
He made his move and from then on their worlds had become one.


When their eyes met they melted almost beyond control.
The world began to tremble with this collision of the souls.

Many watched the fireworks that day out by the lake.
The water was the backdropp for the love they'd surely make.

Their love was overpowering, yet ever gently so.
It made each think that they must never let the other go.


Comments about A Collision Of Souls by Mary Nagy

  • (10/16/2013 2:36:00 AM)


    Fantastic poem about timid love becoming even more. Title is great too! RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (1/11/2007 1:13:00 AM)


    Fabulous, the emotion is just oozing out, I truly loved reading this poem. Thankyou for the experience.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • (3/5/2006 10:20:00 AM)


    Applaud! Applaud! Lady of the lake, sword pulled from stone freeing the passion.Beautiful Mary, Really.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2006 7:13:00 PM)


    Wonderful, I could feel the emotion you placed.Loved it!

    Regards
    Patricia
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  • (2/5/2006 11:00:00 AM)


    Wow your poem was amazing, it was awesome how you captured the emotions perfectly. (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2006 10:32:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem, Mary. More people should focus on the positive like you do. Also, I read this poem from bottom to top and found it interesting to see the roots of such strong feelings at the end (or beginning!) brilliant structure, brilliant poem.

    respect,

    JB
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  • (12/21/2005 3:11:00 AM)


    Very beautiful and sweet to the mind. (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2005 6:34:00 AM)


    Hi Mary: -)

    I like it, love is such a complex thing, and i think you express it well in this poem, you go into great detail, about the little things.

    Great! ! !
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  • (10/24/2005 7:17:00 PM)


    aww i like it!
    Lylyanna
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  • (10/19/2005 11:51:00 AM)


    hello mary, this is phillip. I love the title, the poem is great also, hidden truths. i thought she was going to die after the first paragraph, but it was alove poem. (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2005 8:59:00 PM)


    Mary
    This stands to the love that does occur between man and woman and the romance that we all strive for.
    Well done
    Don S
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  • (9/27/2005 2:54:00 PM)


    Very nicely written. Great job. (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2005 10:49:00 AM)


    another lovely poem Mary, well done V x (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2005 1:03:00 AM)


    Great Poem you should be very proud Thank You for the experience F'nor (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2005 8:34:00 AM)


    Mary-You have written a great poem here that kept me engrossed up to the last word. I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work.

    All my best-Faith Elizabeth Brigham
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  • (9/23/2005 5:49:00 AM)


    'When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake
    she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.'
    ah... excellent begining and the poem is penned perfectly!
    Well done!
    HBH
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  • (9/22/2005 9:20:00 PM)


    This sounds like Starnberger See to me. How did you know?
    Very nice, Mary.
    Best
    H
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  • Ernestine Northover (9/22/2005 1:06:00 PM)


    Hi Mary, I do like this one. It's not Lake Huron is it by any chance, cos it looks as if it has a sort of beach. Sincerely Ernestine (Report) Reply

  • Theorem Thetruthserum (9/22/2005 12:47:00 PM)


    Very good poem with a strong foundation built around romanticism. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 22, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, January 5, 2007


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