In todays technological uptrend
we have the world within our hand
a network could take us all around
A gap within ourselves at hand
no technology could do to mend
a gap between the heart and mind
A dangerous gap at hand
it engulfs the soul in deep sand
no technology yet could mend
The heart would cry out for the world
the mind is petty and cold
not very far from each other the two ends
the mind is the ' doer'
the heart is the 'teller'
the mind prefers not to be a listener
soul rules the heart
fear rules the mind
conscience is the real communicator
CONSCIENCE IS THE TRUE COMMUNICATION TOO
Sort of like a shield or a sterile communications. No real human contact.
Thought provoking poem. If the conscience is strong enough it can also be a guiding beacon. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. :)
mindful, heartfelt write... sends us a great meaning... with truth on the reality of our feelings of ourselves... a piece to make us reflect... thanks for sharing your beautiful insights... _maia_
a communication gap is the worst of all which make the egoist senses on us to play....... we fall and never raise our heads....... your poem certainly brought a meaning.........
This verse has seeds of truth which I heartedly endorse....... the mind has to be controlled then we are the master and the heart can become itself - -we often get this gap between, - - which you aptly wrote about...... thank you 10/10 from Fay.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'soul rules the heart fear rules the mind' Truly expressed: there is gap- heart and mind. A nice poem composed on mind's eye.