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# A Deceiver

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God not as one here
god in a manifold here
himself to many

Man one in many
man only one in many
counting his penny

Nature is enriched
spends and spending its resource
god shows up in it
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awesome Haiku/ senryu.. great write.
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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009
Very well written Samanyan....10+++
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Smiley Hooker 25 June 2009
Sometimes men forget about the true essence of living life under God when deceived by the power of money. Very meaningful and wonderful write, Sam! : -)
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very true, nicely presented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Seema Aarella 24 June 2009
Finally its money the immediate visible aid that catches man's fancy....its almost become his second nature! ! ! ! ! ! ! a good thought there, a good write! ! ! !
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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009
Good poem, well expressed thoughts, well told as always 10 Lynda xx
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C. P. Sharma 22 June 2009
A profound poem. Very well penned. CP
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 June 2009
Very true.......The deceiving nature of mankind is indeed very injurious to the Nature who has bestowed upon us so many things but we fail to recongize that due the pelts of greediness we have...... Regards Naseer
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Louis Rams 21 June 2009
they say money is the root of all evil. good example 'jude' betraying christ for money.
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Bob Blackwell 21 June 2009
A well written poem with wisdom.
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