# A Deceiver Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Deceiver

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God not as one here
god in a manifold here
himself to many

Man one in many
man only one in many
counting his penny

Nature is enriched
spends and spending its resource
god shows up in it

Animal is wild
a wild which thrives in hunting
decipher life not

One to decipher
ignoring god given wealth
counting his penny

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 20 June 2009

very well written.. ignoring the gifts of God.. man counts his penny.. wonderful...

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Joseph Poewhit 20 June 2009

Not wrong to have a penny, but if you worship it, then - - - - - - -

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

Excellent write. I love the 2nd stanza most.

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Raj Arumugam 20 June 2009

excellent writing and insightful

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 June 2009

'All in one and one in all' is the projection of the divine force on the Universe.

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awesome Haiku/ senryu.. great write.

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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Very well written Samanyan....10+++

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Smiley Hooker 25 June 2009

Sometimes men forget about the true essence of living life under God when deceived by the power of money. Very meaningful and wonderful write, Sam! : -)

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very true, nicely presented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Seema Aarella 24 June 2009

Finally its money the immediate visible aid that catches man's fancy....its almost become his second nature! ! ! ! ! ! ! a good thought there, a good write! ! ! !

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