A (Conventional) Love Song! Poem by Valsa George
A (Conventional) Love Song!
Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?
Won’t you come to me to ease my pain
To herald for me a new dawn
To transport me to worlds intangible
To be ever with me as my guardian angel
Hold my hand when I am about to fall
Help me set new goals when I am lost
Make me laugh when I am low
Infuse courage when I develop cold feet
Show me dew drops that I can see diamonds
Feed me with home fare that I may taste Ambrosia
Gift me a rose that a thousand blooms instantly burst open
Talk high of me that rainbows may arch around my sky
Take your glance off, I will wither like a flower
Show a cold shoulder, I am sure to grow frozen inside
Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear
Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards
Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths,
Like two streams that flow and merge as one
And travel miles to run down to the sea,
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
A amazing write up specially plunging into eternity with the immortal love.... I was just floating with your flow of words.
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! Love is God and God is love, the poem is a sweet lovely song for him.
Truly beautiful and nice poem to recite and also to understand the meanings a little difficult it felt.Ambrosia what I don't know.
Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write.
Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths, Like two streams that flow and merge as one And travel miles to run down to the sea, Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! .....nice poetic expression. This is really A beautiful poem on love having fantastic expression. Enjoyed.10
Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards really monsoon reflections
Lovely love and lovely words..title is lovely..lovely poem with a lovely ending..last four lines are beautiful...no doubt you are the poetry Queen! ! ..thank you...thanks for all your comments on my poems and support to me too Valsa
To ease my pain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/29/2023 3:14:23 AM # 1.0.0.1115
A touching poem about the feelings stirred by true love. Wonderfully written and expressed.