TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .


A Cup Of Emotion - Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

EMOTIONS' CUP...

Sip with me a cup of few sunny,

warm and rainy emotions in this morning.

say it before you leave..

The noisy sound which is around

prevent us at times to listen to the beautiful songs..,

do not let us see the truth and the depth of it,

the beauty which is there every where.

wasting for the pleasure when we lose appreciation's treasure....

when we stay blind..



I do realize what within,

that infront and what behind..,

Before the death I taste the life..

from each garden I carry some flowers,

I plant one in me and give other to another.

I carry a stone from each weepy land,

a dropp from each rain.

a painful song, a beautiful scene.
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when I'm away.
by recalling them
I do guard my heart,
I revive my sighing mind


When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd..

we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand...


Comments about A Cup Of Emotion by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    beautiful write keep up the excellent work (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2012 8:05:00 PM)

    speechless.....well wriiten (Report)Reply

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  • (10/13/2010 7:41:00 AM)

    What i say, i dont have words just want to say mind blowing, fantastic and beautiful. (Report)Reply

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  • John Knight (3/16/2010 5:00:00 PM)

    Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X
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  • (12/2/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    its such a cup of emotions that sip by sip gets into the reader to make him feel sory for the good around him he neglected.
    you're a great poet Tamara..good luck.
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  • (11/5/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    i love this poem....hey can u read my poems i have a new poem called damage it would mean alot if you go in read it please. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/1/2009 1:17:00 AM)

    Tamarm. All we have to do is open our eyes to see the beauty that surrounds us. And seek to share such beauty with others. Great. 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2009 8:13:00 PM)

    Ilike your poem.... very deep. the words you speak can mean anything if u have an imagination (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    I had to sip this cup of emotion.Great read as usual.I really enjoy your poems.They have attitude sista.Go girl! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/14/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    It ia great poem at this site......  unforgettable (Report)Reply

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  • (9/30/2009 5:19:00 AM)

    Again i am reading and enjoying your words (Report)Reply

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  • (9/22/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    such a wonderful poem, my mind gallops the wisdom of my soul.....
    what a perfect reflection this coming week ends....thank you
    my friend....and God bless you my dear friend...
    my vow of salute....a 10 +++++++++++
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  • (9/17/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    Peaceful and tranquil desire to stay at place where the dreams grow........a beautiful emotional poem (Report)Reply

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  • (9/7/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    prevent us at times to listen to the beautiful songs..,

    do not let us see the truth and the depth of it,

    these were my fav lines :) :) this is amazing!
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  • (9/2/2009 3:51:00 PM)

    Your unique idea is well expressed and your well chosen words are linked properly, well done (Report)Reply

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  • premji premji (8/19/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    a cup of emotion.........
    a cup of poison.................................
    good write..............................
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  • (8/14/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    Hi TaMaRa,

    Yours is certainly overflowing. I especially liked the closing line. Nice write.

    Cheers, Frank
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  • (8/14/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this. The first line caught my emotions. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/13/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    This is quite a beautiful poem. Very nice...........10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (8/13/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    Thanks for sharing Tamara,
    You have really good lines here!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 29, 2011


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