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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Friday, April 24, 2009

A Cup Of Emotion

Rating: 4.6
EMOTIONS' CUP...

Sip with me a cup of few sunny,
warm and rainy emotions in this morning.

say it before you leave..

The noisy sound which is around

prevent us at times to listen to the beautiful songs..,

do not let us see the truth and the depth of it,

the beauty which is there every where.

wasting for the pleasure when we lose appreciation's treasure....

when we stay blind..



I do realize what within,

that infront and what behind..,

Before the death I taste the life..

from each garden I carry some flowers,

I plant one in me and give other to another.

I carry a stone from each weepy land,

a dropp from each rain.

a painful song, a beautiful scene.
,
when I'm away.
by recalling them
I do guard my heart,
I revive my sighing mind


When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd..

we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand...
TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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COMMENTS
Dr Lakshmi S Bose 02 March 2020
very nice work.. beautifully conveyed
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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013
beautiful write keep up the excellent work
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Hanadi Zahra 20 March 2012
speechless.....well wriiten
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Sayyed Sahzad 13 October 2010
What i say, i dont have words just want to say mind blowing, fantastic and beautiful.
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John Knight 16 March 2010
Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X
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John Knight 16 March 2010
Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X
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John Knight 16 March 2010
Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X
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John Knight 16 March 2010
Hi Tamara - As a classical poet I admire your freedom of expression - your liberty from rhyme - your abnegation of metre and yet your poem flows like a mountain stream and it reaches the heart before the head - which makes you a perfect poet.whatever the MOONSTER might say. What did it say to my heart? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Verse one) SIP (a cup of emotion) and SAY (before you leave) and SEE - the truth and the beauty - treasure and above all else - DONT BE BLIND. (Verse two) This encourages me to SNIP (some flowers) and SHARE (with others) and STONES and RAIN DROPS and SONGS and SCENES - these are every day things but if we ignore them - if they dont register on our sub-conscious by their WEIGHT - WETNESS - WALING and WONDER - we are much much poorer and have nothing to share. If we afford them time and touch 'When I'm away - by recalling them - I do guard my heart - I revive my sighing mind'. The last couplet encapsulates and reinforces the awesome message of the whole poem. 'When we leave without realizing the beauty of that sound which could be found among the crowd - we leave while carrying life's heaviness in one strand. This is so so beautiful and an excellent example of perfect FREE VERSE. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X
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Syma Tasaduq 02 December 2009
its such a cup of emotions that sip by sip gets into the reader to make him feel sory for the good around him he neglected. you're a great poet Tamara..good luck.
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jaynae carmel 05 November 2009
i love this poem....hey can u read my poems i have a new poem called damage it would mean alot if you go in read it please.
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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2009
Tamarm. All we have to do is open our eyes to see the beauty that surrounds us. And seek to share such beauty with others. Great. 10
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Dev Poet 26 October 2009
Ilike your poem.... very deep. the words you speak can mean anything if u have an imagination
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