A Cute One - A Flower Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Cute One - A Flower

Rating: 5.0


thank god
man has not made one
to open you up every morn
even before dawn
thank god
you wait with a coffee dew
for him to sip
and with his lips
he gives you that lovely kiss
the beauty of that love
your face sustains

[you the flower, one-a machine,
he the sun]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a lovely verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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~ Jon London ~ 22 April 2009

The lords loving sun, that brings living loving colour to everything and everyone. Great piece

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Kesav Easwaran 22 April 2009

good imagination...skillful write...thanks...10

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Indira Renganathan 22 April 2009

A different uncommon thought...good flow of words10

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C. P. Sharma 22 April 2009

Scented flowers lose fragrance fast, Pretended love doesn't long last; Ever flowing fragrance in Nature find, Loves true lessons Nature unwinds. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

So lovely and so beautiful! 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 May 2009

wonderful thoughts..very unique on natural beauty not man-made very meaningful... cute and lovely... one can smile on this.. i like the flow and the thoughts 10++++ _maia_

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 April 2009

The good, the bad and the ugly......and the one....its all yours!

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Eyan Desir 29 April 2009

Nice poem hehe good write Dear Poet

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Chitra - 27 April 2009

i feel graced with a cute smile after reading these lines

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