As bright electric lights
slowly faded away
Flames of burning candles
made a splendid array
From a distant corner
blinked her crescentic eyes
Lustrous sparks of glitter
pleasing human signs
Pearly beads like
cute tender smile
Attractive gestures
of irresistible style
Placid moonlight filtered
through the long windows
Touched her cascading hair
creating dark shadows
As the music played smoothly
her eyes turned magically
His earnest longing for her
gradually overflowed
He took his steps foward
following her fragrance
An alluring display of intuitions
in front of an angelic presence
He took her hands
danced across the floor
Turning many rounds
as they floated to the fore
Twirled elegantly listening
to their own souls
Like loving pairs of veil tails
in round aquatic bowls...
Copyright(c) Hemakumar Nanayakkara
As usual, a lovely luminous visual image, with the added movement of the dance - diaphanous veils, exotic colours... beautiful
Magical, spellbinding. I love it and the ending was perfect. (10 from me) .
it's beautiful and it invites to joiiin the dance....
Lovely written. From your words a beautiful mental picture is formed.10/10
Lovely poem. Sensual and romantic. I could see the couple dancing as I read. I am especially fond of the final stanza. Great imagery throughout. Well done.
A splendid dance that commemorates the beauty of your style and fragrance of your thoughts in an eclectic manner. Just beautiful. Arya.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stunning........................