A Day Of Spring Poem by Asif Andalib

Very nice with good sentiment. Hope you are going ok Asif. Thank you for your friendliness. I will have to write some new poems. They have fixed this site now I can use it again. I forgot my password and got busy and forgetfull. Greetings friend

my favorite poems are short and to the point. nicely penned

A beautiful spring hauiku of perfection. Enjoyed.

I can't really explain why, but i like this haiku. most haikus are like that i guess. i occassionally write what Kerouac called American Haiku - same concept, but it doesn't have to follow the 5-7-5 rule. as long as it says something profound or a unique observation in 3 short lines. well done here. -R-

Asif, you write these brief, sharp pictures excelently.

From what I've heard about springs, UI'd say it is an admirable season. You are indeed a good writer of Haiku, it's good to find someone else that takes so much pride in writing it. Well done.