A Fairy Tale Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

A Fairy Tale

Rating: 5.0


Do you believe in 'Happy Ending'?
Coz for me it's unreal but I'm still hoping
That I might enter the world of fairytale
And might found my knight-and-shining-armor, like in tale

I was astonished and tears fell down
As I entered the castle, wearing my crown
I have just seen you dancing to a princess
And domination of love bug supreme, nothing else

At that very critical moment
Hurt dominates and is truly a torment
All I wanted is to vanished completely
That I may not see you kissing her passionately

All of a sudden, you stared at me
You smile, and turn your head face to her with glee
Is there a potion to take away this hurt?
I asked myself reluctantly, feels like I was burnt

I'm going to my solely cage
Feels like locked inside the abandon luggage
Now, waiting seconds - minutes - hours - days to pass
To heal my hurts by time subsidedly and surpass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 February 2010

you wrote this amazingly!

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Adam Reed 09 February 2010

not bad man i think your a terrific writer. good job

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Eyan Desir 09 February 2010

Whats love without pain? nothing good write

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Hajara Abdul Khader 09 February 2010

The poem sounds like a fairy tale. I felt like going back to the days I read fairy tales. Good work!

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Vijay Sai R 10 February 2010

Teasing and tormenting fairy tale of love! nice write

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Monica Sevilla 04 June 2010

wow allen what a great poem..i just come back to poemhunter i was been very busy..uve done a nice poem..keep it up..

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Lana Grissom 14 February 2010

Good going...I could feel ur emotion and pain...a solid 9.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

lost in a bottle reminds one that they are afloat...and there is hope near by...that hope is love understood...faith known not...God is worth the lot...as is true love...the mirror only reflex...the the feeling...as a fairy tale enhance it...

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Wang Qian 11 February 2010

A really beautiful one! ! !

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with time you would be good. :)

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