! ! ! A Fairy Tale: An Encounter! ! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! ! A Fairy Tale: An Encounter! ! !

Rating: 3.2


As a leave dropped on his forehead
his vision was simply led
by a carriage on a dusty road
carried a splendor hidden by a coat

Though it was not at all clear,
he was able to catch a glimpse
of a beauty concealed
and hidden and sealed..

He rose from his rest
heartbeat resounded of his chest
he deemed it was his fate
an encounter he has waited

As his mind and eyes clouded and crowded
by magnificence he's never known
the carriage was then averted
faded and dispersed at the line of horizon...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 December 2008

A fairy travelling on the rose petalled road, left on my heart, beautiful memories load......... Wonderful piece.......

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Fiona Davidson 19 December 2008

Beautiful fairy tale...well written...thank you

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Aijaz Asif 20 December 2008

a very beautiful imagery write with the use of strong metaphors....thanks for sharing 10 rgds

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Reshma Ramesh 07 January 2009

the narration is excellent..............very well penned

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Subbaraman N V 07 January 2009

A great fairy tale! Thanks for sharing!

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Vaibhav Pandey 02 January 2009

very well penned...........

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Nikoru Bathory 27 December 2008

Yayyyy! ! this is what i've been waiting for (>_<) hurry and post the next part of the story, I'm looking forward for it (^o^) v *sry for my childish comments ^^'*

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

beautiful imagery! i love it i give it a 10!

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