A Falling Star Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A Falling Star

Rating: 5.0


I Am a falling star
Before falling
It will shine so bright
Like the last laugh on ones face
Before fall.
What brightness
It can spread on falling.
Its all shine shattered
Like a winged broken bird,
When it can never fly.
With shine reflected on each pieces shattered.
A twinkling star looked so beautiful,
Which bring smile on innocent child's face,
With a twinkling eyes it gazes stars around.
May you spread happiness as long as
You are the twinkle of ones eyes around!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Friday, December 13, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: star
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sumi Nair
Submitted: Friday, October 04,2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 05,2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 13 December 2013

Suman Kumar Das(12/8/2013 1: 21: 00 AM) I Am a falling star....................... excellent work........liked it Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair(10/20/2013 6: 21: 00 AM) There is no such thing as a falling star To new galaxies they go and twinkle And they are yet never too far In memories you can hear them tinkle (good work Madam and welcome to my page)

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Dee Corpolongo 22 December 2013

Beautiful, my friend....and may it shine right to the end....where it still will be as beautiful... for beauty is in the eye of the beholder! Liked this poem very much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 March 2022

A meaningful poem. Appreciated the underlying philosophy...5 stars.

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Amitava Sur 03 October 2014

A thoughtful poem indeed. though the falling star knows that it time is very limited, still it twinkles and emanates it's beauty to please others unconditionally expecting no return.... loved it

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Akhtar Jawad 30 August 2014

The open beauties of this poem are so much appealing that one starts thinking what are the hidden beauties of it, and when the hidden beauties are exposed one starts loving this poem. What a poem Geetha!

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Suman Kumar Das 02 March 2014

May all your inks always shine like stars.............. every time I get inspired reading your write.Thank you for sharing, Madam!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 February 2014

Stars in galaxy do twinkle and hardly tumble.......Geetha.......and you are a glowing star never to fall ever............

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