A Fancy Poem by Bharati Nayak

Now that makes me give a romantic sigh.... many a woman would give anything if her man gave her such passionate attention as he gives his bowling ball or motorcycle or favorite dinner! Love this write, Bharati, and I cannot imagine a man ignoring your sweet self! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++

This is the secret wish of every wife..... or woman! We all long to be looked into our eyes to be read inside out! A deep understanding of the partner cements marital relationships! This poem is equally applicable to all relationships!

Very beautiful poem... Ah, hadyou but held me in your hands Like the newspaper Read my eyes With thesame eagerness And would not let me go, Before you finished reading.... So lovely....thanks

Humor is pleasantly deployed to convey sensual frustration - a good formula!

(cont.) HERE: Ah, had you held me...i think one would be a fairly sophisticated reader of English to understand that the sentence WILL be complete after the word reading. but i think it would be clearer (to me at least) if you had put but after you: Ah, had you but held me.... i wonder how an English teacher would explain that sentence's structure. bri :)

STOP being so good in writing this gem! ! ! stop, Stop, STOP! ! ! i rarely use the word i shall put at the end of this sentence, but i must say i have found this to be FANTASTIC! and probably it DOES qualify as a fantasy. yes, you do have dream as one topic. to MyPoemList. will you have an Odia translation for THIS ONE? (cont.)

What a great concept, Bharati! I like it! For you take something so common to express a longing entirely original in my experience. Cool! Hoping this finds you well, Glen