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A Fathers Reminiscence...

Rating: 4.5

Only yesterday
I stared up at a big world,
with awe struck eyes
Only yesterday
I uttered my first words,
took my first step
Only yesterday
I was so innocent,
closest to God
Only yesterday

I knew no evil,
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Rebecca Navarre 03 September 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! What An Incredibly Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! Filled With Such Heart! ! ! ! ! Ever So Touching! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Jonathan Maldonado 08 January 2014

Thank you Felicia I'm glad you liked it.

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Melody Thaila Kuku 31 March 2012

Well written poem, you presented memories in a new, beautiful and touching way. I go through childhood with you, into the stage of a curious teenager, into adulthood, parenthood and on and on. I share not just a father's memory but my own. Beautiful memories of innoence, dependence, maturity and responsibility. And yes lol, it seems only yesterday we were cradled in our mother's arms. I love the way you captured our attention taking us step by step on the path of life's memóries. I waited to see the end and wasn't disappointed. Thanks Jon.

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Romeo Della Valle 29 March 2012

A reservoir full of rich imagery and powerful and heart touching words! Memorable moments stamped in your heart and mind and you will keep until the day you say good-bye! Yesterday, the vivid reason of Today and the dream of Tomorrow! An excellent write that is thought provoking and well crafted! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You Jonathan! Que Dios te bendiga! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Claudia Krizay 29 March 2012

wow! A lot of suspense in this very powerful poem with a lotof truth in it- well done- keep it up! !

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Jonathan Maldonado 29 March 2012

Thank you guys appreciate the feedback

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Eric Cockrell 29 March 2012

an excellent poem... you wind the time line very well!

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Unwritten Soul 29 March 2012

Jon, it's like a flash back and re walk in the same road again and again, at your own street called memory...I know it was only a write but it play our sight to see all about life, changing in everyone life...it's a good poem, it has good value, deep vision, strong content and a wonderful adventure to read.Well done n keep writing Jon_Unwritten Soul

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