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Maybe

Rating: 5.0

Maybe,
Maybe things will get better
Maybe things will get worst
Maybe a new year will bring forth new cheer
Maybe nothing will change
Maybe water is thicker than blood
Maybe family is myth a thing of the past
Maybe love is a thing that never can last
Maybe friends come and go
Maybe the time of our lives we'll never know

Maybe your eyes will never see mine
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 25 September 2014

Beautiful soulful write. Keep writing whenever you have spare time. Be blessed.

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Ari Lucas 30 March 2012

i like it sirr, its very good: 3

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Danny Draper 27 March 2012

A lot of emotion and good questions. Maybe you are right but will delightfully be proved wrong. May be a spring month where you find happiness

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Valerie Dohren 26 March 2012

Life is full of maybe's, nothing is certain, and this is reflected here. Good work.

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Dakota Sarver 26 March 2012

I really enjoy your work. I think we have a lot of common writing views, check out my works when you get the chance.

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Jonathan Maldonado 25 March 2012

Thanks guys, and Audrey your so right thank you for bringing that up it encouraged me to start working on something upbeat ill let you know when its up id love to have your opinion on it.

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Fox Tail 25 March 2012

Liking that line Maybe, maybe's are nothing more, but flips of a coin that's some funky stuff and you're confidence is all up there, (that's a good thing.) Foreal, good choice of lines. -Fox_TaIL-

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Audrey Heller 24 March 2012

In a lot of your poetry, your very pessimestic! I'd like to see you write, about happy occasions. Surely there are some good things, you can recall that would make it interesting, for the reader. It's a start, but look up and not, down! ! It takes time, but I'm betting you'll come up, with a good piece of work, real soon. Regards, Audrey Heller

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Claudia Krizay 24 March 2012

Johnathan I REALLY love your work- this is spectacular and I can identify with the feelings expressed- Claudia

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