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Baby Sister

Rating: 4.2

Beautiful baby sister
how you have bloomed.
long was the winter before the spring
I noticed the slightest resemblance
of a beautiful young lady in your eyes.
Soon your lips shall feel
the soft press of love's kiss,
at least what you thought was love.
Soon your heart shall feel it's first break
left in the dark shadow

of the coldest shoulder ever to be cast,
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Saturday, January 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: growing up
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2018

Beautiful expression. Thanks and congratulations for being choosen this poem as the poem of the day.

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Sarah Persson 17 November 2018

Congratulations on poem of the day. This is a lovely poem about the love of a sibling. I'm sure you'll be there for her every step of the way.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 November 2018

The end is so beautiful. Such a beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.

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Jonathan Maldonado 17 November 2018

Thank you all very much I truly appreciate you all so glad you’ve enjoyed my work

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 November 2018

A marvelous poem. It conveys the love and care of siblings. Beautifully crafted and lovingly penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2018

How you haved bloomed! ! !

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 17 November 2018

Juicy thoughts of a maturing sibling expressed candidly. Congrats on your being ranked highest. Thanks for sharing. x

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Adrian Flett 17 November 2018

A poem so easy to read with the last two lines carrying the message. We all yearn to be older while young yet long for our youth when older.

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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2018

A fantastic poem, love of siblings nicely written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 November 2018

Jonathan, such a remarkable poem of the day. Congrats for being selected....10++++++++++++

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