a feeling i have
all of us have
which binds us
to the universe
it is like the
green in the leaf
all the
colors on the flower
a feeling which gives me a feet
to feel this earth
a feeling which gives me the wings
to fly on the sky
a feeling which sets us free
yet keeps us bound to all
A TOTALLY GOODNESS FEELING IT IS
all my relationships have shook it now
all my loved one's have left me now
all the feathers in my wings have withered now
so low in morale
no blame on the god ever
the goodness flicker should survive any storm ever
A FLICKER WITH WHICH I SHOULD SEARCH ALL
A Flicker.......has surely keep my thoughts flickering - great write Samanyan
arief feeling only. do not worry. we are with you. nicely expressed voted10 surya
'so low in morale no blame on the god ever the goodness flicker should survive any storm ever' This feeling inside That goodness Should not be blown out Whatever be the storm The strength not to blame God Both will help tide over Whatever be the cause And the Flicker will Always be a Torch! Angel
wonderful simile: ''a feeling i have all of us have which binds us to the universe it is like the green in the leaf all the colors on the flower'' embedded in a nice lyric poem..10+++ from me
very wonderful thoughts....a soul-searching piece we all flicker.... but still we don't give up..we continue to light the way....continue to live... we maybe unsteady sometimes but....we still able to stand still... really a great piece you have shared with us Sam.... for us to reflect on life and on our being.... thanks for sharing....i love this... lovelots, maia
Samanyan, my flicker would be a freedom song, freedom to soar, to fly to distant lands, but then I am sure it bring me back to deal with the everyday problems of living. Facing life head on is the only way. Lovely poem. Bob 10+
Live life, on a 'each day' basis Never know, when the water drifts under the foot Enormous truth, enlarged life Past never repeats, present can't be snatched Future can't be lived. The Flicker... to search... Before that... each day should have held something to search. This poem, read with caution, can be a beacon to youngsters.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well expressed thoughts....nice