Friday, April 30, 2010

A Flower Uncut

Rating: 5.0
Who would have thought that perfection was palpable.
Angel speck-less, man can touch, unbelievable!
Beauty wrapped in flesh, the panacea to man’s
sore heart is found. I can see her. I truly can!

God’s paradigm for creation of women does live.
Her hips are perfect, and her breast substantive,
Tantalizing men, young, and old, to taste of her,
But of the blood of Mary, she is a flower

Uncut, and her nectar is saved for one bee, who
She will wed and become his queen, he - her lord. True
Virtue that transcends into the ethereal. Touch
From heaven, on earth. To whom Herculean much

Efforts were made, where men genuflect in request
To be her lord. But tame, they cannot this lioness
For her heart is unto her like her children.
And I am truly blessed to have her as my friend.

But masked within me are hidden secrets of love -
Undying - for her: my Mona Lisa, above
All other she is to me. So kneeling I pray
That her heart would open to us someday.

Until then, I wait with closed palms, relishing her
All - hoping that I am the bee for this flower.
Then she would be my queen. Now till that moment,
I will be hers to have, and forever.
Leslie Alexis
Dorothea Forbes 02 June 2014
Wow really great poem excellent read.
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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013
beautifully written poem. an uncut flower will last forever.
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Shazza Rixx 03 October 2011
Beautiful poem :) 10++++
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Dylan Gaudreault 03 October 2011
beautiful. really liked the line 'Uncut. And her nectar is saved for one bee, who She will wed and become his queen...' made me really get in2 this poem. i am enticed by this touching write. perfect ten!
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Vipins Puthooran 03 October 2011
Amazing poem... Wonderful imagination... Meticulously penned lines...excellent and great write... Top marks 10++++
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Dave Walker 03 October 2011
Wow. You just blew me away with this. Great write. Fantastic.
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Crimson Love 03 October 2011
This is a magnificent poem, your word choice was well thought out, and interesting poem, truly beautiful.
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Alicia Phillips 03 October 2011
i think its awesome i love it
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Kendzi Samuel 18 July 2011
Damn! This is good man! Been readin many of ur poems. Love them a lot. They are like written photographs of beauty.
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