A dark funnel cloud
Rotating fast in the sky
Like a fighter jet
Ready for a blinding strike
To terminate enemies.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Expecting rains in heat strokes, the funnel cloud with a promise the same, we all expect rains in such a hot summer. On the other hand lacking thoughts to write a poem, a poet expects some miraculous inspiration. A beautiful poem so nice penned by the poetess.
Nice poem on clouds.Like a fighter jet ready for a blinding strike.....10
1) oftentimes in the clouds we see figures, a figure or a collection of many clouds, so that we store something in our imagination, the longer we think about it in thought, we often " see" something to our imagination and " finish" that picture we have seen, such as a dark funnel cloud, ready as a fighter jet for a blinding attack to eliminate enemies!
The comparison of funnel clouds to that of fighter jets is absolutely brilliant! A thoughtful write...5 stars
A very powerful poem expressing the might of natural forces.....! Sometimes it can unleash a tornado or a cloud burst!
Reminds me of being a small child when I first saw my first tornado...10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderfully written terrific tanka, dear ate Rose...10+++❤️❤️❤️