A Funnel Cloud Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Funnel Cloud

Rating: 4.6


A dark funnel cloud
Rotating fast in the sky
Like a fighter jet
Ready for a blinding strike
To terminate enemies.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 May 2020

A wonderfully written terrific tanka, dear ate Rose...10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2020

Expecting rains in heat strokes, the funnel cloud with a promise the same, we all expect rains in such a hot summer. On the other hand lacking thoughts to write a poem, a poet expects some miraculous inspiration. A beautiful poem so nice penned by the poetess.

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Nice poem on clouds.Like a fighter jet ready for a blinding strike.....10

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Anjandev Roy 26 May 2020

To terminate enemies.......brilliant. anjandev roy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

1) oftentimes in the clouds we see figures, a figure or a collection of many clouds, so that we store something in our imagination, the longer we think about it in thought, we often " see" something to our imagination and " finish" that picture we have seen, such as a dark funnel cloud, ready as a fighter jet for a blinding attack to eliminate enemies!

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Rob Lamberton 30 December 2022

The winds of strife may strike without warning!

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Anjandev Roy 27 February 2021

Another brilliant work.....thank u...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 November 2020

The comparison of funnel clouds to that of fighter jets is absolutely brilliant! A thoughtful write...5 stars

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Valsa George 16 October 2020

A very powerful poem expressing the might of natural forces.....! Sometimes it can unleash a tornado or a cloud burst!

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Bryan Smoot 07 October 2020

Reminds me of being a small child when I first saw my first tornado...10++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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