A Glorious Brightness Poem by Hazel Durham

A Glorious Brightness

Rating: 4.9


The light never fades,
The light never dies,
Its glorious brightness never lies,

I see the belief in your eyes that holds my flickering light
As darkness invades my inner sight,
My deep love is stolen by the night

Sweeping over my emotional garden,
Every flower falls down,
Falling,

Appalling,
My natural love was swept into dark corners,
Swept out to a lonely place

Surrounded by shallow mourners.
But now I float in your softest blue eyes
With your frequent tears melting in the corners,

You hold my hand
As the glorious brightness captures the darkness
Invading the land,

We unite as our love swallows the hate
As we cherish our moments
Our beautiful fate,

God is sweeping our pain away,
The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day,
A celebration of our passion in are garden of flowers standing tall,

As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone
To our lovers throne,
As the night creeps away alone.

Monday, December 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: past
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 December 2018

God is sweeping our pain away, The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, From the caverns of darkness and pain, you are brought into the sunny space of light and joy! Love can work such miracles! Enjoyed this poem about the mental transition!

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Susan Williams 26 December 2018

I would love to give you a 10 but there is no voting booth - -is this a problem with just my computer or is everyone experiencing this problem?

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Hazel Durham 27 December 2018

Yes Susan, I noticed it to, but it is the thought that counts and thank you for your wonderful comment!

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Mihaela Pirjol 11 December 2018

I love how each stanza progressively intermingle, as a contrast of light and darkness; of past and present; of memories and the reality of the present moment: all creating a wonderful culmination in the last stanza: As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone. '' - A fantastic composition!

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 December 2018

'As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone. '.. is excellent lines. So long as the light of love keeps glowing life looks beautiful. Loved te use of imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

My deep love is stolen by the night excellent line its like a LUNAR DAY 14 DAYS BRIGHT THEN 14 DAYS DARKNESS

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Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2019

Nine three liners very nicely intertwined and makes it a beautiful poem! 'We unite as our love swallows the hate As we cherish our moments Our beautiful fate, God is sweeping our pain away, The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, A celebration of our passion in are garden of flowers standing tall' - these are the best two stanzas that I liked most.

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C F 26 February 2019

Beautifully written, mesmerizing in cadence, it hold the reader spellbound till the end, and wanting more.

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone..... beautiful lines

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M Asim Nehal 28 December 2018

There is a light at the end of every tunnel and your poem is guiding light inside the tunnel. A wonderful poem.

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