A Golden Hue Poem by Hazel Durham

A Golden Hue

Rating: 4.8


You embroidered my cloth of dreams
To an enlightened golden hue,
With your flamboyant conversations,
Which created a colourful tapestry, that was just you!

An aura of distinction of an enviable freedom,
With your original and probing point of view,
Of every moment lived beyond your expectations,
Like a wild tiger roaming the parched plains of Africa,

A restless energy and your artistic vision
Like the wonder of the rising sun,
You looked so deeply into my unknown soul,
With your questioning and fun filled brown eyes,

Always searching for answers like hidden rain in heavy clouds
Bursting open in brooding skies,
A voyage to discover and embrace my dreams and make them real,
With the memory of your deep and tender kiss giving your heart

As a loving seal,
Of your quest to lift forgotten flowers
To their restored bloom on a carefree summer's day,
Your untamed spirit quenched my parched thirst

To particles of fine golden sand on a weather beaten bay,
Like the energy of constant, restless time,
You left far too soon, a tragic end,
Your haunting melody lingers to mend

The terrible pain and loss
Of an exciting, loving and kind man,
You leave behind the gift of your golden hue,
As a beautiful reminder of you!

Sunday, May 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 May 2015

A beautiful life with a man who probed deep into your soul and gave wings to your dreams is vividly described with the use of striking imagery! After giving you golden memories to cherish and relish ever in life, he has left! But this departure hasn't saddened you as he has left eracable impressions in you! Great write Hazel! 10

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Lyn Paul 24 May 2015

Simply heartfelt your Golden words. Keep those incredible memories strong.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2015

As a loving seal, Of your quest to lift forgotten flowers To their restored bloom on a carefree summer's day, Your untamed spirit quenched my parched thirst A beautiful poem....................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2015

The terrible pain and loss Of an exciting, loving and kind man, You leave behind the gift of your! ...a great feeling. Excellent collocation.A beautiful poem I like most.........10

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 May 2015

Deepest love poem from an evergreen lover as a gift and reminder- marvelous Hazel Durham

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2017

What a poetic line! You leave behind the gift of your golden hue, As a beautiful reminder of you! Thanks for sharing here.

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Mizzy ........ 26 August 2016

Beautifully written Hazel...I hope writing this helped your grief to heal. Thanks for sharing!

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A golden poem that is loaded with love and loss! Well done my friend!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

A Fantastic write from your golden pen Hazel. Beautiful lines... The terrible pain and loss Of an exciting, loving and kind man, You leave behind the gift of your golden hue, As a beautiful reminder of you! Sweet memories left by a beautiful soul. I loved the flow of words and touching poem indeed.

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Jak Black 26 May 2015

A great write by a very talented lady. Wonderfully created similes. Well done, Hazel.

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