A January Day Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A January Day

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From dawn to dusk
I see a timid sun
And overbearing clouds
Playing upon our dreams
The sun wants to give fire
To our extinguishing hopes
But clouds are full of mischief
They overshadow the sun
And our dreams die of cold.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Tuesday, February 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 12 April 2018

It is all Nature's mischief! However never let our dreams die out! A simple, sweet write!

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Siddartha Montik 01 July 2017

Beautiful Poem.. yet with a subtle shout of Clouds though they do their duty for us! !

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Abhilasha Bhatt 02 February 2016

But some day those clouds will be flew by a storm....lovely poem....thank you for sharing a beautiful poem :)

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Barry Middleton 02 February 2016

To often it is indeed wither that wins. I have never given up on dreaming but I am always aware now of the clouds and the cold. Good work.

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Aarzoo Mehek 02 February 2016

Never give in to the mischiefs of those playful clouds.. cause they know they can't hold back the majestic sun of hope for long. Dreams never die... Beautiful poem and love the way you write. Nothing less then 100...

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 June 2018

Wow! ! ! ! That is poetry, Aarzooo. I loved your poem better than Nosheen's write here!

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Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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