A Love Poem Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A Love Poem

Rating: 4.8


Every day you drift
into the stream of my thought
without my knowing
I don't need to pause,
to stop midway
or catch my breath
I let myself flow
from day to night
All the while you glow
as the sun or the star
I safely alight
as a bird on its perch
I'm not tired
though forever I search
You keep me afloat
just by existing
My dear, look at my smile
I owe this to you.

Friday, August 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2017

I'm not tired though forever I search You keep me afloat just by existing My dear, look at my smile I owe this to you.... touching expression. Beautiful poem on love shared nicely. Thanks.

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Nafis Shadhin 04 August 2017

very touching and romantic poem.

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Nidhi Agrawal 04 August 2017

Lovely poem. I safely alight as a bird on its perch, I'm not tired though forever I search. Beautiful lines.

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Shakil Ahmed 05 August 2017

Beautiful love poem

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Shakil Ahmed 05 August 2017

Beautiful love poem heart touching

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Lovely lines loaded with love my friend!

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 August 2017

Write comment. A nice poetic image. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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M Asim Nehal 18 August 2017

Awesome love note......Love emanates from the heart and it reaches the heart, I agree with Daniel's comment, I wish to live this dream too.

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Daniel Brick 14 August 2017

Those closing two lines seared my heart: they are so sincere and reveal a person ready to be a grateful and joyous lover. The emotion you express increases your energy rather than depleting it. That too is proof of this emotion. The whole poem breathes an atmosphere of calm and desire doesn't disturb the calm but deepens it. If this poem is just a dream, I want to sleep again! !

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Valsa George 11 August 2017

A warm and sweet poem on love! Love is being depicted as the focal force around which life and light rotates.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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