A Journey Poem by Seema Aarella

this poem is a journey in itself, a beginning and an end, , and in between there is so much introspection, a poem where head and heart are in perfect balance, hence a very balanced love poem, love triumphs at the end of teh day. a different poem from seema's repository, , thanx

very vivid and full of life.. written with zeal and confidence...flows from within...cheers an thanx

quite vivid write indeed with lots of passion and love floating in the lines.....thanks 10+++++ 'Each time I inhale and exhale Again and again forcing the utterance of your name! '-simply bravo'ssss rgds asif

Well written young lady

flows like a resonant river! ! ! ! ! ! !

A very nice and praiseworthy poem. Thanks dear Seema for such beautiful a poem. I loved these lines most. There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Vanish the wrinkles of depression And crumble the bloated ego of time

There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Beautiful lines, expressing eternal and divine love. Thanks dear poet.

lovely poem Seema- very touching and eloquent. Mamta

There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Vanish the wrinkles of depression....... bring me all happiness and laugh..... i m quite impressed with words and its prersentation.....10 read mine o.mother ahd butterflies around

'There I curse the prolific gardens Their opulence unbearable and sick I hide my swathed feelings within And envy those flowers and vines I know they all will lament and die When you arrive more enchantingly than spring! ' A marvelous poem- a marvelous journey.