A Land So Fair Poem by Patricia Grantham

A Land So Fair

Rating: 4.7


A land that's overflowing with milk and honey
No need for food, clothing, goods or money
Neither sickness, sorrow, death nor pain
Nor shelter from the storm not even the rain

The cities are paved with streets of pure gold
Rivers of waters flowing with riches untold
There will be no sun to shine ever so bright
Stars that used to twinkle on a starry night

Angels will sing songs so glorious and gay
There voices can be heard all night and day
A trip that's eternal never more to return
Where you'll live forever no more to yearn

Traveling to a land that is ever so fair
Where the Heavenly Father will meet you there
A place where life will never have to end
The journey is over a new life to begin




Copyright 2013

Friday, February 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: bereavement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 18 February 2013

Oh! What a paragon of an imagination! And what a wonderful poem with its rhyme and rhythm with music flowing in the land that is over flowing with milk and honey! !

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 18 February 2013

yeah, agree with chandra a great poem with lovely rhyme n rhythm really enjoying when i read it thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 26 February 2013

Imaginative and inspired write - well penned.

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Neela Nath Das 12 March 2013

A Utopian conception it is! A beautiful world without any problem.Loved.

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R.j. Wynn 04 May 2013

Great poem, love it.10's

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Maria Gonzalez 31 August 2015

I quite enjoyed this poem. It came from your heart and the core of your beliefs. It spoke your truth.

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Melvina Germain 13 August 2015

I love this poem and hope and pray that one day I will walk the grounds in such a paradise...Thank you sister for this beautiful description.....

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Amitava Sur 31 October 2013

Wish I may place myself in that place right through........... That day I'll tell you Pat how rightly you're true. Very nice imagery to cool the sole..... love it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

A place where life will never have to end. A journey to that land is what one yearns for.

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Louis Rams 30 July 2013

this is the beauties of heaven, high above the ground, where there is peace and love, and no sickness to be found where the words ' brother and sister and feelings are truly shown, and the love for one another is all that is known.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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