A Lifting Of My Heart Poem by Ernestine Northover

A Lifting Of My Heart

Rating: 4.7


I stepped over the rickety wooden stile,
and entered a meadow of sweetness.
Clover, daisies and buttercups
all intermingled in a silent chorus of song.

Insects buzzed in the warming sun,
and the country air
filled my lungs
with a sharp freshness.

Looking into the distance,
I watched, as a flock of birds
took to the air,
swooping across the sky,
calling joyously
in their freedom.

The World had stopped to give me
one afternoon
of sheer exhilaration.

I ran through the flowers,
I waved to the birds,
and felt a lifting of my heart.

This was paradise,
even if just for a short time,
but a time in which to refresh and energize
my body and spirit.

A time also
to renew my awareness
of the beauty of nature,
and its wonderful panorama,
displayed in all its serenity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 28 February 2008

This poem is so beautiful, lovely imagery. Andrew x

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CU2urDream Lost 11 January 2008

This is a whole trust when irritation come, obey and carry out his word in dealing with them this is a super natural reponse and its wonderfully penned from you...lovely Ernestine.

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Ivor Hogg 22 August 2007

The finest therapy for a weary soul just get out into the open air and use your eyes and ears to full extent. We miss so much concentrating on work most often confined within the souless vista of a city

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Meggie Gultiano 21 August 2007

what a wonderful gift the Lord has given to us..to enjoy nature! i join with you in expressing my delight in seeing wonderful creatures crerated by a wonderful God..oh, thanks for this, Ernestine! love it..top marks from me.. love and hugs, Meggie

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Marci Made 28 June 2007

this is an awesome an up lifting poem...I walk away feeling uplifted and carefree..This is a gift about nature from a soul filled with a love for it. This is how I feel after times on the islands, the shore, and the peace and calm and treasures it always offers me....You are one of many here who are a pure delight to read.~~~marci.xo. :)

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

i can see the longing.. for the lifing of a poetic heart in tandem with a bunch of joyous birds taking to air...good poets bring out lines beautified from what they see around and place them on a poetic platter... good lines such as these...10

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Philip Housiaux 18 May 2008

crucial observations and feelings are caught. good work

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara 20 April 2008

An amazing poem about the beauties of nature. It was an absolute serene piece of write.

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David Stansfield 07 April 2008

Lovely, lovely! It reminds me of summer. Will it come this year.

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Lillian J. 01 April 2008

Imageful and beautiful work! Lilly :)

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