A Limerick For Bri.97. Poem by Valsa George

A Limerick For Bri.97.

Rating: 4.3


A friend of mine eats lots of ice cream
At its sight his eyes would gleam
His name is Bri
Though a nice guy,
If denied ice cream, he would scream

A Limerick For Bri.97.
Friday, December 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 03 December 2016

Hahahahaaa....Bri... If denied, he screams... Amusing write Mam. Well tribute to dear Bri for ice cream.

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Spock The Vegan 03 December 2016

Another limerick writer! Good job, and the picture is hilarious.

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Bri Edwards 03 December 2016

Valsa, my dear, i WANT THAT ICE CREAM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! if you don't give it to me NOW! ..... i shall........................................................................................................................................................................... SCREEEEAMMMMMM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I think i got all the messages you recently sent. i also see the hilarious and tempting photo now: 12-3-2016 at 12: 3 P.M. Pacific Time in northern California. to MyPoemList.........of course. thanks. bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 03 April 2018

Bri; I have known him for sometime With ice-cream there is no halftime But it shows in his waist Like a bathtub misplaced He even have it at bedtime Thanks Valsa.

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Valsa George 03 April 2018

Wow.........Like it Loke! Though in a grown up's dress clad At heart he is very much like a child Ice cream is his weakness He drools over its sweetness If refused, he would simply go mad

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Tom Billsborough 15 February 2017

Oi, Valsa, I'm the Emperor of Ice Cream, not Bri Edwards, though he is a gallant runner-up! No doubt there'll be a challenge coming if he reads this. It's very funny and as you mention Ice Cream and Bri this will have to go into my favourites!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 05 December 2016

You targeted our Bri! LOL! He might now consider quitting ice-cream! (10)

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2016

I’m deaf and dumb on his screams, When in winter he's denied ice creams, He jumps from winter to summer, Lacking springs becomes a drummer, Poor drums sound rough, it’s Bri’s gleaming! ......................A great Limerick, became difficult for me to reply.

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Valsa George 04 December 2016

Summer or winter, Bri doesn't care Ice cream won't tire him, this I can swear Any amount will easily melt on his tongue His craving for it can even beat the young

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Bri Edwards 03 December 2016

but! GREED? ! i'm JUST getting my nutrients!

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