A Lonely Story Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Lonely Story

Rating: 5.0


When love is lost
All hope goes too,
All those, Memories
Now, Solitude!
No chance for Spring
Nor Summer, gold
Forever Winter
Icy, cold.

But I still,
Love you!
In the darkness
Of my everlasting
Solitude,
Still feel the beating
Of your heart,
Next to mine
Much more
Than I ever
Should,
True love
Is certainly forever
And its loss,
The most terrible
Emptiness
Ever felt,
Even when
Icy Winter
Starts to melt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 December 2022

This poem is full of wonder and sadness Bravo TFS

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Sandra Feldman 12 December 2022

Really

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Sandra Feldman 12 December 2022

Really! so perfectly said, thank you so much, LeeAnn. Much obliged, such a wonderful, spot on comment

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Sandra Feldman 12 December 2022

Such empathy and understanding, sooths the heart, Thank you so much, my friend!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2022

Deeply poignant and touching. Beautiful poetic lines that touch the heart and very soul. Yes, true love when lost creates a void that can never be filled up.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2022

I cite you: The most terrible Emptiness Ever felt, Even when Icy Winter Starts to melt. Such Saddest Words, but Loveliest and Sweetest Told. Adorably and Brilliantly told.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2022

I love your Saddest Love Story In The Memories Brilliantly Told, This Is Jewel, This Is Gem, dear Sandra, This IS Gold! ! Thank you for sharing your Saddest Story

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2022

Cute Crystal Clearly Composed, Sweetest Sadnes Ever Told, Forever Full Beauty Is Love So Old, but Icy Cold, so Icy Cold, Is Sweetest and Saddest Story Retold.5 TOP Stars

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Nosheen Irfan 13 December 2022

Very true. Love is necessary. Without love, life is barren. Heart touching poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 December 2022

Beautiful words so tenderly expressed. A pleasure to read x

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