A Lover's Wish Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Lover's Wish

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You become my lover tonight
We shall play hide and seek
Under the moonbeam
You chose one star
And I shall pick one
This long night will melt
With sweetness of our saliva
The dews from our eyes
Will make the dry land wet
Let your dreams fly
With the fragrance of rose
Let the river carry your emotions
To the sea where my heart is waiting
To embrace your love
Before, final ring of the morning bells
And the emerging sun rays
That is ready to wipe off
Yet another fairy wish from me.

Wednesday, March 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2019

Let your dreams fly With the fragrance of rose....perfumed expression! A lovely poem....10

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thanks much Dr Dillipji.,

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Kostas Lagos 13 March 2019

A fantastic love poem Mohammed!

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Gordon Walter 14 March 2019

Nice wish and I pray let it come true. Lovely style, simple words and effective writing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

Lovers play hide and seek. Lovers beautifully share emotion. Love embraces morning light. This is very nice poem amazingly penned.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 March 2019

Thank you for the invitation to read this poem! It has the ethereal splendour of Sufi poems: it reminds me of the profound incandescence of Rumi's poems: the only one I truly love reading!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2019

Let your dreams fly! ! ! ! 👫😍🤩☺🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

Thx Much my friend. Edward..

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T Rajan Evol 13 March 2019

Articulate poem.....Let the river carry your emotions To the sea where my heart is waiting To embrace your love

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M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

Thx Much TR Evol.

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