A Lover's Plea - English Ghazal Poem by M. Asim Nehal
A Lover's Plea - English Ghazal
Those seven colours of your charm alive
Thus, invite me to own a rainbow of my life
I have fallen from the mountain of my ego
To the depths of your sea like a waterfall
In some corner of your infinite spacy heart
My tiny love fire tries to ignite me in you
Please keep safe the pieces of my feelings in your eye
You may require them to shower when I am gone.
Awesome.... Please keep safe the pieces of my feelings in your eye You may require them to shower when I am gone.
Superb poem with fine couplets...I pick: I have fallen from the mountain of my ego To the depths of your sea like a waterfall
I love this fascinating English Ghazal, Asim ji. The metaphors used in the poem with a philosophical insight makes the poem truly charming like the seven rainbow colours of life. Wonderful poem that deserves five stars.
In love's plea seven colours come alive to paint life's music and natural love builds a new mansion. A brilliant poem is very well penned with much beauty. An amazing sharing is done really!
Very well penned and beautifully pictorized. Please keep safe the pieces of my feelings in your eye You may require them to shower when I am gone.... beautiful words.
Excellent couplets Those seven colours of your charm alive Thus, invite me to own a rainbow of my life
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/27/2023 11:31:27 AM # 1.0.0.1113
Another fascinating ghazal! 5 stars