A Loving Death

Rating: 5.0

Loneliness,
A drop of death
Slowly bleeding,
Day by day.

I loved you
And you went
Away,
Not a word said,
So empty
Is my life
Today.

Can you
Hear,
My spirit falling,
Trying to run,
Away,
Still calling
Calling!
Your loving name
Every single day...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Keep calling as we all.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2020

I loved you And you went Away, Not a word said, So empty Is my life Today......so impressive. In love affair it happens sometimes and it is known as despair. Beautifully composed. Five stars.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2020

Loneliness is just like drop of death. An amazing thought you have presented. Spirit tries and fall in love. This poem is very interesting one...5 stars.

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Robert Murray Smith 16 October 2020

A person who leaves that way is not in love. When the mist clears the sun shines.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 October 2020

Despair is truly hard to overcome. It takes time to heal the broken heart. Well conveyed poem...5stars*****

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