suzan gumush

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A Mental Pause - Poem by suzan gumush

I've come to a mental block
It's called a mental pause
It's Blocked all my writings
And I can't focus on my sitings
Those hot flushes
Do rush in fast!
How long will this whole thing last!
It's driving me crazy
Sometimes I just want to be lazy
What the heck!
It's turning my life
Into a reck!
Sometimes I feel muddled
I just need to have a good cuddle
Well anyway!
Like all you men say
It's just another excuse
For us women
to have our own way


Comments about A Mental Pause by suzan gumush

  • Raj Nandy (8/8/2008 10:19:00 PM)

    A good poem, written with frankness and intelligence! I enjoyed reading it both as
    a poet & also as a Homeopath Doc!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • Dawn Slanker (8/6/2008 11:42:00 AM)

    Very fun and creative...I enjoyed this greatly. (Report)Reply

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  • Malini KadirMalini Kadir (3/26/2008 10:58:00 PM)

    Lovely way to put it! fun to read enjoyed it! . (Report)Reply

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  • Barry Van Allen (1/26/2008 7:26:00 AM)

    Suzan,
    Who spilled the beans?
    You are not supposed to know that we know that!

    B.V.A.
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  • Chuck Audette (1/17/2008 5:06:00 PM)

    fun one! I'd rather find myself in the middle of a mental pause than in the middle of a tiger's paws. -chuck (Report)Reply

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  • Beth L Adams (1/6/2008 3:14:00 PM)

    Hi, Suzan! This was so well written - very descriptive and humorous! Wonderful insight into the world of womanhood. Enjoyed! Take care, Beth (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/8/2006 5:45:00 PM)

    NOT WRITERS B L O C K! My God, Susan, if this is contagious, this site will go down in less than 24 hrs! lol! Hey, we have all been there, & i for one am th' laziest when it happens, cuz i just don't want to deal w/ it...Because th' bottomline is if you are a good writer, which you most certainly are...the block will break when you least expect...you can't force it...all you can do is ride itout, with th' rest of us.i hear tell that Chaucer had horrific writing blocks, yet, the Canterbury Tales still came to be...' A Mental Pause 'is is a great piece on everything YOUneed not worry about, young lady! Nice Job''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R (Report)Reply

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  • David Gerardino (11/6/2006 11:50:00 AM)

    great poem, there are times when i cannot come up with any ideas, so what i do is read, , , some times its works other times not, , , , , (Report)Reply

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  • Linda OriLinda Ori (11/5/2006 10:14:00 AM)

    Nice piece of writing, Suzan. You put it all into perspective!
    Linda
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  • Trinity K (11/4/2006 7:14:00 PM)

    suzan, you are right....you just need a cuddle....
    now is the time male menopause come into focus....its as real as... female excuse.....bravo....
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  • Philip Teed (11/4/2006 2:45:00 PM)

    Nicely put. I would agree that most men say that. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 4, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 2, 2010


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