Dr. Nikhat Bano


A Message - Poem by Dr. Nikhat Bano

The rays have brought your message
Piercing through my closed window
I can read a golden hued line
'I'll be yours, all my life'

Copyright: DrNikhat Bano
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Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Quatrain


Comments about A Message by Dr. Nikhat Bano

  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (2/2/2018 11:28:00 AM)

    Wonderfully crafted poem with utmost economy of words. (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (6/22/2017 5:51:00 AM)

    Simple and catchy indeed....thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (6/16/2017 11:29:00 PM)

    Simply superb, imagery and style of expression. Congrats on poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/16/2017 6:16:00 PM)

    Reading a golden hued line is amazing through vision of mind uniting with light of wisdom that comes up to us. Piercing through window this Divine light rays come as grace of God. We feel these rays with due love. Love for God is eternal and love of God is eternal. An excellent poem is very well penned.10.....Congratulations! (Report)Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (6/16/2017 11:00:00 AM)

    Undefeatable, undeniable and unchallenged power of love. It can penetrate any enclosure. Wonderfully crafted poem. Congrats for gaining the well deserved acknowledgement. Thanks for sharing. X (Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (6/16/2017 10:37:00 AM)

    Very beautiful and spiritual..Welcome to PoemHunter.. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (6/16/2017 9:41:00 AM)

    All my life! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (6/16/2017 8:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful line..presence of true love is felt everywhere, even in a closed room..here sun is compared as the lover and rays reaching through her window is the message of promise. Congrats (Report)Reply

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (6/16/2017 6:12:00 AM)

    very nice poem. I heard about you somewhere, but I can't remember where. Perhaps on Facebook. Congrats on being poet of the day! (Report)Reply

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (6/16/2017 6:12:00 AM)

    very nice poem. I heard about you somewhere, but I can't remember where. Perhaps on Facebook. Congrats on beibg poet of thr dsy! (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/16/2017 4:55:00 AM)

    Congrats for this coveted selection of your very first composition on this Forum as 'Poem Of The Day'. Rare distinction. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/16/2017 4:50:00 AM)

    Welcome to this august Forum, Dr. Nikhat Bano, along with an outstanding poem. The message is as soft and delicate as the beatings of a lover's heart. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (6/16/2017 3:38:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem of future commitment to the love of another? .................beautifully written (Report)Reply

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  • Richard Wlodarski (6/16/2017 3:35:00 AM)

    Through rays of sun
    A heart of gold

    Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Most deserved.
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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (6/16/2017 3:12:00 AM)

    Such a lovely poem..... I rate it 10++++++
    You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER, HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, and EACH PASSING DAY...Thanks....
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  • Christina SimmonsChristina Simmons (6/16/2017 2:40:00 AM)

    This written piece is so very positive: makes one feel very hopeful, in deed. Thank you, for coming up with such an inspiring poem. CONGRATULATION! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (6/16/2017 2:09:00 AM)

    Love's message written on sunlight- -So vast and so strong an emotion compressed in such few words- -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • William BaezWilliam Baez (6/16/2017 12:07:00 AM)

    beautiful and simple, a nice economy of words (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (6/15/2017 8:50:00 PM)

    Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Passionate piece of poetry elegantly encapsulated from the heart with conviction. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Nikhat. (Report)Reply

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  • Nikhat  BanoNikhat Bano (6/7/2017 11:43:00 AM)

    these are four lines about a deep, passionate love of a person, who happens to see his/her lover even in the sun rays. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 7, 2017



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