A Message Poem by Nikhat Bano

A Message

Rating: 5.0


The rays have brought your message
Piercing through my closed window
I can read a golden hued line
'I'll be yours, all my life'

Copyright: DrNikhat Bano
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A Message
Wednesday, June 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 June 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Passionate piece of poetry elegantly encapsulated from the heart with conviction. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Nikhat.

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Nikhat Bano 07 June 2017

these are four lines about a deep, passionate love of a person, who happens to see his/her lover even in the sun rays.

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2017

Love's message written on sunlight- -So vast and so strong an emotion compressed in such few words- -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Richard Wlodarski 16 June 2017

Through rays of sun A heart of gold Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Most deserved.

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Rajnish Manga 16 June 2017

Welcome to this august Forum, Dr. Nikhat Bano, along with an outstanding poem. The message is as soft and delicate as the beatings of a lover's heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 February 2018

Wonderfully crafted poem with utmost economy of words.

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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2017

Simple and catchy indeed....thanks for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 June 2017

Simply superb, imagery and style of expression. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2017

Reading a golden hued line is amazing through vision of mind uniting with light of wisdom that comes up to us. Piercing through window this Divine light rays come as grace of God. We feel these rays with due love. Love for God is eternal and love of God is eternal. An excellent poem is very well penned.10.....Congratulations!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 June 2017

Undefeatable, undeniable and unchallenged power of love. It can penetrate any enclosure. Wonderfully crafted poem. Congrats for gaining the well deserved acknowledgement. Thanks for sharing. X

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