A Moment Of Paradise Poem by ramesh rai

A Moment Of Paradise

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Truly speaking
believe it or not
but it is true

on 16th March,
i had a dream
at about 03.00 a.m.

i was gazing at the sky
i was seeing
two Angels folding their hand
came down from sky
landed on earth and stood
before me.

i was surprised and
thought, it was a shape
or like me, to be confirmed
i touched one angel
with my fore finger

they both smiled and
flew away to the sky
crossing the clouds
they became vanished

i was gazing and thinking
was it a dream or true
thanks God! I realised
a moment of Paradise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 22 September 2012

A beautiful poem so original full of spirit and wonder!

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

a moment in paradise a beautiful thought.

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Lord's Gift 17 March 2012

Wonderful Story! There is angels & Jesus is Lord; There is a God the Lord Jesus Christ.

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Dave Walker 23 March 2012

A really beautiful poem, like it.

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Anhelica Velasquez 23 March 2012

i like it. it tells a story and plus its pretty

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Akhtar Jawad 16 September 2014

Love of humanity gives peace of mind, and peace of mind gives peaceful thoughts, and peaceful thoughts show a glimpse of a moment of paradise in dreams that are almost a reality. A nice write.

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Gnossienne 23 March 2014

A tantalizing glimpse into the Eternal.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 March 2014

A beautiful feeling of a Moment in Paradise. It gives a nice feelings after having such a beautiful dreams. Loved reading it.

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Ken E Hall 31 October 2013

When you write at times you have heavenly thoughts shall I say a moment in paradise...yes indeed...thanks and regards as always

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Queeny Gona 14 October 2013

Nice feeling to dream such a pleasant moment!

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