Moon in satin while veil
sees reflection in groom’s eye-
blushes like morn’s sun
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Moon waning crescent
Hides behind clouds of shame-
Shyly look at radiant sun
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Dew melting softly
Sighs in bluish moonlight-
kisses feet of svelte lass
Anjali
16-01-2009
hey, after reading ur poem i am feeling the beauty of moon and sun from a very closer side, .ur poem is stunning, and it will make me to feel this glorious beuty forever.NICE job anjali
The moon in satin will be there to smile As the knight dies for her veils of the night The morn's sun is back to shine As the knight clears the dark clouds from its terrain The dark clouds are gone and so did all silhouette of veils They took the knight in some nocturnal wee hours As the night shook them far away away and away across the oceans, waning on mountains unknown far away in the galaxy fired all vulgar vulpine vies and vexations When the knight turned back he just smiled Not beause he is also unison of a vie But he lost the way he came for his one, one loving cutipie An wonderful imagination and i hope they become truth for your part of equator.A 10 from me.
Dear A njali., Though not exactly in Haiku form, you have marvellously expressed the the three parts of the night where love falls thru moonbeams.Perfect choice of words, imageries depicting a marraige night through the shy eyes of the bride.Evening, late night and early hours before the sun rises. To me its a trilogy completing a poem A
Each one melts into each other so good I am moonstruck the work is excellent +++++++10. regards avanice1
Wow a trio of what goes on in the moonlight written with such class a delight at night+++++++10 Regards uavanice1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is one more dimension of looking and thinking creatively on and about moon, Moon has always drawn the attention of the poets of all ages. this is a very delicate way of loving and living with the moon in a moonlit night.thanx