A big mud puddle
After a long heavy storm
A boy's great playground.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
A splendid haiku. Thoughtful. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
An excellent three liner! Thoroughly enjoyed...........................................................10
Excellent RM! Reminds me of my childhood! A 10 and straight to my list
very true.I have enjoyed many times in my bucolic childhood days. Thanks for the poetic touch.
Children love to play in puddles. They are not worried that their dress get dirtied.....! Cleaning them up will be their mothers' headache! It is a place where they play with paper boats. You have brought nostalgic memories to my mind!
Nice imagery nice visual. I am able to see a boy playing in a pool there.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Not only an aftermaths of a long heavy storm, a metaphor of emotional storms and its after effects. A poem is sometimes a mud puddle that is left behind after heavy emotional storms. A great three liner with a lot of meanings.