In the circumference of my life,
Mother nature's laws I can't defy...
I must move forward to a new level
Without becoming a fool or a rebel...
When I die, I want to leave a legacy behind.
Dying with a clear heart and mind...
A heart broken but a pride still untarnished...
Why worry about a love already vanished...?
In trying to reach my ultimate goal,
I buried a past I couldn't have foretold...
Now, my new love is just for humanity,
Living humble without disdains or vanity...
It is a new me! Yes, indeed!
Of shadow and pain, I have been freed...
No more tears or feeling lonely,
Since I became, 'The One and Only'...
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a new realization = a new life reconnecting with the Higher Self. A new life for realizing the soul's purpose well written! !
like an eagle that soars and a lion that roars, you are free indeed to be free! nice write!
When I die, I want to leave a legacy behind. Dying with a clear heart and mind... A heart broken but a pride still untarnished... Why worry about a love already vanished...? This particular stanza is really touching and coincidentally my guiding principles in life.We must die by leaving marks for people to track.We must die without causing people pain that can never heal.we must be proud of being broken but became strong in the process and finally brush aside hurting thing which can never be undone. this is a great lesson for humanity to imbibe.Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!
This is a wonderful write however when something old dies one must be careful. with what is consider as a rebith Society as being fooled dont be.... I know you know what i am talking about..... great job my friend 10
That was pure enjoyment. Thank you. And after having read so many somber and sad works I was elated by the last, 'No more tears or feeling lonely, Since I became, 'The One and Only'...' Romeo Della Valle
Dear Romeo Della Valle, A wonderful poem portraying your desire to ring in a new life. Best wishes in your efforts to forget the past and to live in the Present. Warm regards, Kannan
Congratulations you have finally out of misery and was born again. You can move on now. Defeating the harsh realities of life. Another brilliant creation from a brilliant writer. The rhyming were truly preempted and it's right there, unforced and smooth flowing. Each rhyming word readily connect to the next line. This is what I mean 'smooth and unforced'.10+
Great poem, and very insperational, once more you have express your toughts and feelings in a free but poetic way. - ur forever friend
Sailing in the sea of sweet srenity after sailing in the streesful storm. Well done my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Now, my new love is just for humanity, wonderful confessional poem, well-structured, with strict rules of composition, very well expressed ideas... 10/10