Nero CaroZiv


A Night Mood - Poem by Nero CaroZiv

The moon reddish color looms through horizon's fog
In the dancing mist the hazy meadow sleeps
By the green lush a reptilian creature calls his mate the frog
There where a shadowy movement stealthily creeps

Water flowers fold their petals round
In the distance tall and in close array
Yellow willows outline their shadowy forms to the ground
And towards the dark thickets the fireflies stray

The screeching owl wakes and soundlessly scouts its links
It beats the dark air with heavy wings
And heaven is filled with muffled light
Pale moon appears and spreads the splendor of the night

Rise up! Rise up!
Sloth forlorn silver moon
Send your gleams through the forest glooms
From every branch and leaf
There comes a voice beneath the bower to relief

Oh precious divine moment
The shy sleepy pond not too late behind
Joins to reflect shimmering mirrors
The silhouette of the dim willow
Where the winds calmly lament over water

Oh vast and tender universe sky
An appeasement seems to lower
From the firmament star-adorned
Let us love, let us dream
It is the hour of glamor sheen

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Topic(s) of this poem: night


Comments about A Night Mood by Nero CaroZiv

  • A B Faniki (10/14/2019 8:41:00 PM)

    Great imagery and well crated. Thanks for sharing. Geat write (Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (9/30/2019 11:52:00 PM)

    Enjoyment of the night by different aspects of nature's manifestations narrated wonderfully making the poem worthy of poem of the Day. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/30/2019 10:33:00 PM)

    superbly written the silence of night
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    Silence
    the night with the mild dark, harsh dark
    not on the woe, rue, foe
    row by row, step by step
    the silence immersed into the ultimate den of heart.....
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  • Belle WassermeisterBelle Wassermeister (9/30/2019 9:36:00 PM)

    Very nice poem with great images. Congrats on poem of the day! (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (9/30/2019 7:09:00 PM)

    An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Nero. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (9/30/2019 11:27:00 AM)

    Water flowers fold their petals round
    In the distance tall and in close array
    Yellow willows outline their shadowy forms to the ground
    And towards the dark thickets the fireflies stray. what a fine poetic description. tony
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  • James MclainJames Mclain (9/30/2019 10:55:00 AM)

    Great poem full of eye dazzling information.
    Thank you in this a fine effort.

    James McLain 🎸
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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (9/30/2019 9:41:00 AM)

    A very nice poem full of promise and hope. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/30/2019 8:28:00 AM)

    Oh vast and tender universe sky
    An appeasement seems to lower
    From the firmament star-adorned
    Let us love, let us dream
    It is the hour of glamor sheen......touching expression. Beautiful poem on love and dream is astutely delineated. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.
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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (9/30/2019 4:49:00 AM)

    Great imagery...great poem...congratulations! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Sankhajit BhattacharjeeSankhajit Bhattacharjee (9/30/2019 1:33:00 AM)

    The poem on night is full of life. (Report)Reply

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  • Chandan DeyChandan Dey (9/30/2018 2:24:00 PM)

    The silence of the night is beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
    Chandan
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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (9/30/2018 11:41:00 AM)

    A very nice poem about all the dramas taking place at night. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Harley WhiteHarley White (9/30/2018 9:24:00 AM)

    An excellent poem... lyrical and evocative from start to finish... (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (9/30/2018 6:31:00 AM)

    Divine moment! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (9/30/2018 1:18:00 AM)

    Congratulations, Nero, for having this poem selected as member poem of the day! (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/30/2018 1:11:00 AM)

    Nero, such a wonderful poem of the day.
    Congrats for being chosen....10++++++
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 13, 2018


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