The train
Moved,
And
In no time
We
Were out
In the countryside.
Pink clouds
Dotted the evening sky.
Far out,
Paddy fields.
Smoke
Billowing out
Of the chimneys.
Dim lights
In the cottages
Of sparsely populated
Villages.
Soon its
Twilight,
All is quiet.
Just a few miles
Away from the city,
Which comes to life
At night,
With
Nocturnal activities.
A journey to tranquility and peaceful awareness... uncomplicated, yet eloquent...
Yes, a train journey normally evokes a train of thoughts as landscapes pass by, while we move ahead to our destined end, with a sense of joyous expectation! It has been well expressed! -Raj Nandy
It is an enjoyable journey well scripted with a few well clicked snap shots. Liked the flow.10 Rema
i agree. it was a very nice train ride with me there too. very vivid and touched my heart.thank you doc.
That was a wonderful train ride in the country. Thank you so much for taking me! Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Madam, I liked the simple way you express even tough things. A true poem sathya narayana
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The words are few and concise but the poem comes alive in the mind. True art. Thanks, Mamta.