A Perfect Autumn Day Poem by Daniel Brick

A Perfect Autumn Day

Rating: 4.9


Thursday, November 3,2016

Today there was no wind. Everything was
still and in its proper place. The air
we breathed was abundant summer air,
even though the calendar insisted it was
already November. The sun spread its light
evenly across a cloudless sky, and its warmth
descended gently to envelop us. The sky itself
was an immense pane of purest glass, which
hovered over us like an immense window
into the Cosmos...

But Galactic Things and their huge scale were
far from my thoughts. I focused on small things
of immediate wonder, things close enough
touch and smell, as commonplace as flowers turning
toward the sun, or birds asserting their territories
with songs...

Late in the afternoon I arrived at SALEM HILLS PARK,
named after a nearby church, an old building
from one hundred years ago, with its adjacent cemetery.
With images of church and cemetery, my walk assumed
the character of a pilgrimage, a focused journey
with people of similar purpose and drive - Friends!
What are friends if not companions of our mortal journey
through time to a destination common to all mortals.
Thus, are we all pilgrims, each with a special trait:
some a sense of direction, others a sense of purpose,
still others with keen memories to recall events,
and those bold, confident few who tell when we must
change direction or purpose and renew the journey.

Yeats already spoke for all of us:
SAY MY GLORY WAS I HAD SUCH FRIENDS.
They swirl around me even now: Sonya and Robert
in Minneapolis, my sister and her family,
my aunt and uncle, Rosie and Bob, Paul at Lyngblomsten,
Rosemary in Portland, Liza in St. Petersburg.
Soon after I finish my litany, shafts of darkness pierced
the woods, and I hastened my steps. As I drove home,
night completely enveloped this perfect Autumn day.

Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature walks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

Wonderful description.... perfectly aligned.

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Aarzoo Mehek 15 November 2016

I can feel the poem, indeed it's perfect autumn. Beautifully written with intricate details captures readers heart and mind...It takes the reader into another world. Beautiful poem.10

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Hans Vr 11 November 2016

Looks like you had some amazing moments of magical beauty. Lovely poem

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Nosheen Irfan 09 November 2016

Yes, indeed it's a perfect autumn day. To find pleasure in little things in our surroundings is the best a human can do. The imagery is vivid n evocative. The reader takes a walk with you through this lovely autumn day when Nature is at peace. And the warmth of friendship n relations is felt in the air. I love the philosophical touch you give to the poem by reflecting upon the direction n purpose of our mortal journey. A great write. A perfect 10.

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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2016

A very meaningful poem. You focused on small things of immediate wonder- - - flowers turning to sun, birds asserting their territories with song- -You also wonder about the purpose of our journey, that nature destined for us, and who are with you in this journey- - -your friends- -from your immediate family to distant friends- - - - spread from Minneapolis to Petersburg- - - - The poem has deep spiritual undertone when it says 'Soon after I finish my litany, shafts of darkness pierced the woods, and I hastened my steps. As I drove home, night completely enveloped this perfect Autumn day. ' An amazing write, thanks for sharing.

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