'A Poem' Poem by Pink Butterfly

'A Poem'

Rating: 5.0


I've lost my path so many times
And fell down to the ground
I've been the queen of fools
And was trapped by the weakness' sound

And then you came you find me
And picked me from the ground
You release me from the throne
And killed the weakness sound

I never lift my hands to you
But still you hold it tight
The road was dark for me
Until you gave out light

You embraced me so warmly
That my soul can barely feel
With your tender loving care
My heart has come to heal

A million thanks I offer you
For guiding and loving me
My Lord you're my saviour
The one who set me free


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 14 January 2010

very beautifully written, and the praise and acknowledgement to our lord is something that we share.

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Javier Zamorano 14 December 2009

thank you for reminding me the beautiful friend i have in jesus. its an honer to praise him with our heart and you pieced together a piece of art that i am sure jesus smiles for. thank you.

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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

Nice and comforting..10s

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

'You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal' Beautiful write. Well expressed poem I like it very much Great

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Marieta Maglas 22 August 2009

well expresed poem, excellent written....10

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Hans Vr 22 March 2012

Beautiful touching poem.

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Azul Noir 28 July 2010

A beautiful way to give thanks.

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Kristoffer Randolf Ramos 08 April 2010

Amazingly beautiful poem, I love it

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Marvin Brato 17 February 2010

Romantic and amazing passionate piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Iron Panda 23™ 27 January 2010

this is beautiful! ! i felt at peace as i read it :)

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