A Poem Without A Spine Poem by Shaun Cronick
A Poem Without A Spine
Writers can all kid themselves
A weary poem easily written.
Weary as in self defeating,
Twice shy and once bitten.
A poem so facile to do,
Just jig things around.
Make them sound poetic,
Words presented profound.
But what to end on,
In that closing line.
Maybe no moral message,
A poem without a spine.
An excellent criticism - -one should make certain they have a message before spilling words that rhyme all over the page. Top marks.
A very prudent and thoughtful write with a fabulous title... Appreciated! 5 stars.
" A poem without a spine" - such an eloquent way of bringing this to attention. Though I enjoy mindless nothings, poems with spines always encourage me to get lost in a world of poetry. I've been gone a long time, you used to rate poems out of ten. I hope you're satisfied with only five.
A thousand pardons Bryony. I meant Bryony not Byony, it's been a long demanding day... Well that's my excuse and lets face it it is a good one. So my humble apologies once more.....BRYONY! H e l l hath no fury like woman scorned!
Brony welcome back and thank you for your superb and welcomed comment. And how right you are when it comes to reading poetry. Glad to have you back and take care, I wish you well.
Thank you Dillip for your most generous and superb comment good sir. Take care and enjoy life.
Than k you Susan for your most welcome and kind comment. Take care and remain blessed.
Thank you Kim for your kind comment and visiting. Take care and I wish you well good sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/19/2024 1:08:14 AM # 1.0.0.1119
For a poem to have a spine, it needs a good closing line.