Faiz Ahmed Faiz

(13 February 1911 - 20 November 1984 / Sialkot / British India)

A Prison Evening - Poem by Faiz Ahmed Faiz

Each star a rung,
night comes down the spiral
staircase of the evening.
The breeze passes by so very close
as if someone just happened to speak of love.
In the courtyard,
the trees are absorbed refugees
embroidering maps of return on the sky.
On the roof,
the moon - lovingly, generously -
is turning the stars
into a dust of sheen.
From every corner, dark-green shadows,
in ripples, come towards me.
At any moment they may break over me,
like the waves of pain each time I remember
this separation from my lover.

This thought keeps consoling me:
though tyrants may command that lamps be smashed
in rooms where lovers are destined to meet,
they cannot snuff out the moon, so today,
nor tomorrow, no tyranny will succeed,
no poison of torture make me bitter,
if just one evening in prison
can be so strangely sweet,
if just one moment anywhere on this earth.

Comments about A Prison Evening by Faiz Ahmed Faiz

  • (2/19/2018 6:11:00 PM)

    Wow. About the best poem by Faiz (Report) Reply

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  • Susan Williams (12/7/2015 3:35:00 PM)

    This poet's heart can never be imprisoned- oh, but he frees the soul from bitterness and loneliness so surely his soul is just as free as those he freed (Report) Reply

  • Junaid Ahmed (7/14/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    A great poem by a great poet. Faiz was a poet who amazingly put his feelings in reader's heart. My Salute to him. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2011 5:53:00 PM)

    Just too beautiful....pure ecstasy in reading (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2011 5:11:00 AM)

    Like on a magic carpet reading this work...wonderful composing a treat to read. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Muzzammil (12/26/2010 12:49:00 AM)

    Nice poem exhibits a great expression of the feelings and the plight of the prisoned people. The language is simple but ideas are soaring touching the sky. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2010 1:31:00 PM)

    strangely can an evening in a prison be so sweet....brings tears into my eyes.....are da thousands of my kashmiri brothers feeling same in indian prisons or are they not allowed to see the moon? God help all those innocent people languishing in indian jails.... (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    a poem of truth about political, human conflict and eternity
    nice penned down

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  • (2/5/2008 1:51:00 PM)

    I love the image of stars as a rung, a spiral staircase into the evening. The entire poem is clever and well-written. (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2006 7:08:00 PM)

    Where, indeed, is the boundary between political, personal, and universal experience? This is a very beautiful translation, Agha Shahid Ali - and you are much to be commended for offering it. A moment of awareness of the present is, indeed, eternity. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 3, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 21, 2010

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