A Promise Poem by Ruby Honeytip

A Promise

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I would make love to you
every night.
Our Souls would be nourished,
By the fruits of our feelings.
The warmth, trust and anticipation
Would build through every intercourse of emotion
And be released
With one knowing heartbeat
Pressed to the other.
You make me believe in God,
For who else could be responsible
For this intimate, glowing gift?
Yes, we would make love to each other
Every night
Then fall asleep

Hand in hand

Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 31 August 2014

Ruby, you are amazing with the way you can convey your message into a poem...so sensually, and filled with charged emotion. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Dee Corpolongo 31 August 2014

Ruby, you are amazing with the way you can convey your message into a poem...so sensually, and filled with charged emotion. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Joseph Anderson 27 March 2014

A super charged poem of sensual emotion writen on a high level of intimacy. A really beautiful write- a real keeper

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